The Broken Ones

Stephen M Irwin

Hachette Australia (2011)

ISBN: 978-0-7336-2713-2

Reviewed by:  Gaile Hughes

Grey Wednesday happened, and the world changed forever.

The Broken Ones is certainly a different take on genre bending.  The story is set in Brisbane a few years in the future, and blends police procedural, supernatural mystery and spec fiction with a touch of grim horror.

The hero Oscar Mariani is a flawed and rumpled, yet incorruptible detective, working in the newly created Nine-Ten Investigation Unit. The unit was formed to deal with crimes related to events that have occurred since ‘Grey Wednesday’, the day the world was thrown into chaos and the unthinkable happened – the dead have risen and everyone is haunted by an ever present, silent and eyeless spectre.

Crime and corruption are rife, and murders and suicides are commonplace.  The governments have failed to deal with this catastrophic event and the police are losing control as the economy and resources begin to disintegrate and society fragments.

An apathetic Detective Mariani and his small department are under threat of closure, when a new murder snaps him out of his lethargy.  A ritualistic serial killer is murdering young women, and Mariani gets caught up in an investigation that no one wants him to follow.

The world Irwin has created is a bleak place, the horrors visual and grim, with Brisbane portrayed as a wet, sodden and broken city. The story has multiple twists and turns and is tautly plotted, with enough creepiness to keep you awake until the wee hours.  The cast of characters are colourful and richly developed; although there is often a surfeit of adjectives.  However, it provided rich sensory insights for the reader.

Readers should be aware that the story includes the brutal killing of an animal and, although it does relate to a later event, I felt that it was unnecessary and could have been omitted.

Brisbane author Stephen M Irwin’s first book THE DEAD PATH was published in 2009.  It was described as one of the scariest stories of the year. With his second novel THE BROKEN ONES it seems he has taken the readers on another creepy and haunting ride.

Kylie, Mandy, Gaile and I had a wonderful time at She Kilda and we’ve put together a little round up for you!

Mandy says:

For me, the SheKilda experience began months ago, when I found myself part of the planning committee, and the illustrator for some of the merchandise that was on sale at the convention. The months leading up to the big weekend were full of sleepless nights, constant sharing of tweets, blogs, Facebook posts and an overflowing inbox. Little did I know that the lack of sleep wasn’t going to end prior to the convention itself – oh, no – SheKilda was a weekend packed full of authors, panels, books, friends (old and new) and more than anything, laughs.

Officially, my weekend duties included playing contributing author and signing at the ‘Scarlet Stiletto: The Second Cut’ book launch with a gaggle of other writers, teaching a workshop on writing for the Scarlet Stiletto competition with fellow shoe winner and judge Jacqui Horwood, (hopefully we were able to impart some sort of good advice), and appearing on the panel ‘The Hand That Rocks The Cradle’ with Kylie Fox, Angela Savage, Leigh Redhead and Tara Moss. We’re all mums who write crime, with varying experience – both in the motherhood and writing areas. Not only was it a privilege to appear alongside such experienced authors, but it was a hell of a lot of fun, too. I also had the chance to play with a ‘dead’ body for the final scene of the convention – but I’ll let Kylie fill you in on that one!

Unofficially, SheKilda meant a weekend of way too much fun. And friends. And laughing so hard I couldn’t breathe. Highlights included catching up with the fabulous Marianne Delacourt herself, spending too much time at the bar with South African Queen of Crime, Margie Orford (who had some great tales to tell about mixing motherhood and writing). But most of all, I came away with the feeling that the second SheKilda was just the beginning. The community of women crime writers in Australia is astoundingly talented and supportive of one another – and it can only get bigger and better from here.

Kylie says:

What a weekend SheKilda was! Over sixty women crime authors and experts, legions of fans and readers of the genre, a “dead” body on the pool deck, oh, and me!

I went along to SheKilda not really knowing what to expect and incredibly nervous because of that. I’ve been to plenty of Sisters in Crime events and seen many panels with these amazing authors and, often, had the opportunity to meet and chat to them. But this was to be my first time actually participating in panels – somehow without my noticing I’d become one of them!

By them, I mean those author-people that I have revered for so long. But need I have worried? In a word – no. SheKilda blended those author-people with readers and fans flawlessly, so that there was no differentiating between the two. Not sure what to say? It only took a simple, “what are you reading?” and the conversation flowed. How could it not?

I survived my panels – in fact I actually managed to enjoy myself – thanks to the marvellous co-panellists and chair-persons, who put me at my ease and enabled me to chat.

The weekend was a blur of key-note speeches, a book launch, incredibly funny, inspiring and informative panels, an awards night, too many drinks at the bar with a certain international guest and wonderful conversations.

But what will be my lasting impression of SheKilda? The camaraderie, that “sisterhood” if you’ll excuse the term, that I’ve never known to exist anywhere else. There was no hierarchy, or none that I was made to feel – the most successful writers mingled with the newbies like me but made us feel like their peers. Every single woman at the convention was inspiring in one way or another and every single one of them was encouraging and friendly.

We have some amazing talent in this country, as this convention showcased, but of equal importance, we have a support network that I think, is beyond compare.

Gaile says:

What is a ‘newbie writer’ doing at a crime convention where 66 panellists including published authors, reviewers, cops, publishers, forensic specialists and journalists were present – having a ball that’s what.  The conference started with a bang on Friday evening with a cocktail party, and there was an excited happy buzz to the room.  I have to say I had a few ‘Linda Blair’ moments as my head spun from side to side, to catch sight of one or the other of the abundance of celebrity authors.

However, these were not authors from on high.  These were enthusiastic, joyous, incredibly warm women, who chatted with you, encouraged you, and even listened to your half-baked plots and uncertain ramblings about writing.

This wasn’t a conference where the authors congregated in their own little conclaves.  That night I shared a chat and a drink with an international guest, the following day at lunch another author talked about her endeavours to get published.  The workshops and panels were informal, enlightening and a huge success.  And yes, those authors were still enthusiastic, still very ready to share and a sheer joy to listen to.

I think Lindy Cameron Co-convenor of the conference summed it up best – ‘Our modus operandi is fun – we’re a literary clan where a good crime is had by all.’  Amen to that!

Marianne says:

I’m on deadline, so my round up will be very brief. Simply, it was the best weekend I’ve had in a long time, full of inspiring women doing interesting important things. I came back totally recharged! Much kudos to Lindy Cameron, Carmel Shute and all the organisers for an amazing experience.

Marianne and Sister in Crime, Tara Moss

Article by: Belinda Hamilton

Holy crap! Did any of you catch the new program, Ringer, on Channel Ten on Sunday night? (9:30 October 9th)

What a gripping hour it was. I could NOT believe my eyes and as for the twist in the storyline, I think it just broke the mould on how to write a psychological thriller.

K here’s the gist. Sarah Michelle Gellar plays identical twins Bridget and Siobhan (pronounced Shy-bon). Bridget is a recovering druggie and alcoholic, awaiting a court date where she’ll testify against a murderer who understandably doesn’t want to go to jail. Siobhan is the New York socialite complete with husband, penthouse apartment, and high-flying life.

Siobhan asks to reunite with the sister she didn’t want to know up until now. Bridget squirms her way out of her court appointment and they meet in the Hamptons. A day trip on a boat turns crazy nasty when Siobhan goes missing. Bridget assumes her sister’s identity to avoid having to give evidence and to keep her sister’s death a secret.

But seriously, that is just the tip of the iceberg. The storyline is so gnarled and twisted that missing an episode would mean nothing in future episodes would make sense.

Did Siobhan kill herself? Was she murdered?

This is such a far cry from Buffy that the only thing in common is the lead actress, the rest is flipped out crazy, but in the way we all like.

It’s like The Parent Trap meets Face Off.

Check your local guides for more information.

Location, location, location

Article by: Janette Dalgliesh

I have a confession to make. I’d love to be a fearless traveller, jet-setting my way around the world, getting to know the intimate secrets of exotic cities and distant locations, trekking Nepal or riding bareback across Mongolia.

But the reality is, I like my pillow too much. I might talk it up big, but scratch the surface and I want five-star comfort, my own hire car, decent roads and an early night with a good book.

I’m not much of a traveller.

The good news is, I don’t have to be. I watch loads of documentaries that take me deep into remote rainforests, up impossible mountain heights and across windswept savannah. But my favourite way to virtual-travel, without a doubt, is between the pages of good crime fiction.

Location can appear so powerfully in crime fiction that it almost becomes a character in the story. For me, a strong sense of place is not essential in other kinds of fiction. As long as I have enough visual information to imagine the characters and figure out what they’re doing, it doesn’t usually matter what city or village or paddock they’re in.

But with crime fiction, that sense of place is enthralling. And without it, a book just won’t do it for me. Obviously that’s one reason I’m a fan of Tara Sharp, with her connection to the rarely-explored and rich variety that is Perth, one of my favourite cities in the world!

So why is location important? To begin with, from a purely practical point of view, the local legal system matters. Can civilians carry weapons? What powers do police or private investigators have? Are vigilantes accepted and encouraged? What other agencies – government or otherwise – might exist? Which drugs are legal, or at least decriminalised? How about prostitution? Bioethical issues?

At a deeper level, location provides a connection to the cultural and political landscape through which our heroes move, and the societal norms that prevail. What gender roles are standard? Are there tensions between the rhetoric of law-and-order and the reality of widespread corruption? Is there a war brewing, or are we in the aftermath of one? How are children viewed—as rare and precious beings, or a cheap and easy workforce?

Each of these can provide key narrative elements for a writer, in endless combinations.

But for me, the best part of a good location is the visceral, sensual flavour of it. The tiny details which bring a place to life. The crawling traffic. The hot dry dust. The frozen wastes. The malls and diners, the scrubby bush, the pubs and theatres and churches and brothels and dives.

Shane Maloney’s version of Melbourne is very like the real Melbourne that I’m familiar with, and he draws it for the reader with fine dexterity, backed up by excellent research. For his bumbling amateur detective, Murray Whelan, the political climate isn’t just a backdrop; it’s a crucial part of his life. Whelan connects with, and gets embroiled in, a variety of typically Melbourne sub-cultures. The older, darker forces of the union movement, the incestuous world of arts politics and the worst of sleazy sports corruption all come under the microscope—and they do it in ways that unmistakeably spell out “Melbourne”. This isn’t just about geography or the layout of a park; it’s about the soul of the place and I love to visit!

Elizabeth Peters Amelia Peabody books have a similar effect on me, even though her Egypt is that of the 1890s through to the 1920s, now long gone. She takes us from the archaeological digs of Dashur, Amarna and Luxor, replete with heat, sand and musty, bat-filled burial chambers, to the filth-strewn back alleys of Cairo and the colonial extravagances of Shepheard’s Hotel. I know this is fiction, but it resonates with my childhood memory of the old Semiramis Hotel, where I stayed in an opulent suite with my mother, and our trip to the Great Pyramids. That faint echo between her fictional, historical Egypt and the Egypt of my own  history, is sufficient to let me relax into the rest of her locations.

Alexander McCall Smith has written several different series of books, each set in different locations. The location I’m familiar with is Edinburgh, home to his 44 Scotland Street series. His description of “…the towering stone edifice of Warrender Park Terrace, with its giddy attic windows breaking out of the steep slate roofs…” takes me straight back my time in that city. I even lived in an apartment building up four flights of stairs, exactly as described in the first novel, 44 Scotland Street—right down to the musty smell in the flatshare bedroom. Ah, memories…

So it’s not surprising that when I read his No 1 Ladies Detective Agency books, I feel confident relaxing into his depiction of Botswana and the world of Mma Precious Ramotswe, where formality and good manners are the order of the day  and the mysteries can as easily be a missing dog, a husband devoured by a crocodile or even suspected muti killings. It’s a wonderfully exotic and deeply foreign place for this white-bread, London-born, middle-class girl.

Janet Evanovich’s version of New Jersey, as seen through her Stephanie Plum series, is no less exotic. Although Plum is a product of “the burg”, a respectable, all-American, blue-collar corner of Trenton, she embraces the fact that crazy drivers, armed madmen, sticky heat and unbreathable air are all part of the landscape in Jersey. I suspect I’d find Plum’s Jersey utterly terrifying, but I love to visit through the pages of Evanovich’s books.

Perhaps one day I’ll get my travelling mojo on, and visit Botswana and New Jersey, and all those other places detectives do their thing. But for now when I catch myself jonesing for somewhere different, I’ll take myself off to fiction-land.

Where do you like to go?

Well, I don’t know what you all think but I’ve watched the trailer about half a dozen times and I reckon it looks GREAT!